Reflection 1.1

I wrote my paper as if I was writing a final draft, but I left out the steps where I really went back and reflected on it. I thought that I could benefit better by having an outside source (Professor Henderson) look at the first unchanged draft so that I could see how I did when openly putting my ideas into the paper. Now that it has been reviewed I am going to go back into my essay and fix some of the points in which I reviewed. I am going to be careful to make sure I am not being repetitive and making more solid clear statements. I think this was an interesting way of approaching a paper and will aid me in future papers in the way I structure the essay and how I use rhetorical analysis.